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27-08-2014, 07:07 AM
RE: Atheist Poetry
True Lies, By Brian37 (also posted at http://www.rationalresponders. com listed in my poetry thread ling in my sig)



Tumble tumble

Down the stairs

Rat a tat tat

Only bad guys die



Blame the owner

When things go wrong

General Motors

Was held responsible



Instructor dead

A girl traumatized

Gun manufactures

Sell True Lies



They want our highways

And public roads

With no street lights

Or stop signs



A free for all

Is what they want

For shear profit

At all costs



"Controlled environment"

At a gun range

Yet it still happened

Because of "True Lies"



Liberals do not

To get rid of all guns

Just some sanity

Instead of "True Lies"



You don't need an Uzi

To shoot a deer

You don't need an assault riffle

To protect your house



The police do not need

Tanks or gear

This is the industry

Selling fear



This is about profit

And nothing more

About a lobby

That does not care.

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04-12-2014, 08:14 AM (This post was last modified: 05-12-2014 06:40 AM by Brian37.)
RE: Atheist Poetry
Eleven, By Brian37 (aka Brian James Rational Poet on FB and @Brianrrs37 on Twitter)



No video of me

When we smashed cars

No video of those

When I witnessed shoplifting



No video of

The fights on my block

In the sports bars

Or frat house parties



No video of

My own parties

Underage drinking

And smoking pot



No video in my young 20s

In the parking lot

Acquaintances

Busted for drinking in public



No video

When pulled over

I was a passenger in a car

Of a guy in no shape



Staten Island

To Ohio

12 year olds

Or in a Walmart



Video or not

What is wrong

There are separate rules

Within our deep denial



A disturbed man

Sitting in a chair

Waves his gun

All around



Another man

Shoots at a lawyer

In front of a court house

For all to see



In both cases

They stay alive

Even with a gun

While others unarmed



Prosecutors

Indict a ham sandwich

Cosy with cops

Video or not



I can't breathe

I can't breathe

I can't breathe

I can't breathe

I can't breathe

I can't breathe

I can't breathe

I can't breathe

I can't breathe

I can't breathe

I can't breathe

(end)

Also posted at my home poetry thread post #517 here.
http://www.rationalresponders.com/forum/31771?page=10

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04-12-2014, 09:41 AM
RE: Atheist Poetry
(22-08-2014 04:06 AM)Brian37 Wrote:  
(22-08-2014 12:37 AM)Shadow Fox Wrote:  I could rewrite a lot of that to flow a lot better. It gets pretty good in many places but is in dire need of revision. Far too many places in that poem there breaks the poetic flow and actually puts a complete stop to the message itself.

Nope, been writing since the early 90s some 400 plus. Belonged to a poetry group back then. One thing I can tell anyone that writes, fuck what others say. I've read poems that were metered and yadda yadda, but dog whistle words don't get your message across it doesn't mean shit to me.

I've read so much and, not all of it is metered, I've read others that are simplistic that I love. And when people read mine, I am always amazed at what they like. Point being, I hate judgmental pricks because with all art, it is up to the individual as to what they like. If you don't like something, it is a matter of YOU personally not liking it. That is fine.

Seriously, OP, don't listen to book learned technocrats, just be yourself. Poems do not have to be written with rhyme or meter. Yes you can use those things, but the most important thing is that people get the message and like it.
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04-12-2014, 09:49 AM
RE: Atheist Poetry
There once was a god from Nantucket ...

Bah .... fuck it.

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13-12-2014, 01:45 PM (This post was last modified: 13-12-2014 05:32 PM by Brian37.)
RE: Atheist Poetry
Shooting Star, By Brian37 (aka Brian James Rational Poet on FB and @Brianrrs37"RationalPoet" on Twitter"



How many here

Reading this

Can name

Every President



How many here

Reading this

Can name

Every Pharaoh



How many here

Reading this

Can name every

Prime minister of China



How many here

Reading this

Can name

Every Caesar



How many here

Reading this

Can name all prior

Leaders of the world



How many here

Can name

All the pop icons

Prior to their birth



How many here

Can name

The leaders

Of the Mayans



Fame is local

Fortune is finite

Powers shift

And life goes on



Trump to Tut

Isis to Jesus

Wealth to poverty

We are still finite.



Sagan

As right as he was

Knows that all this

Is Shakespeare's fury

(end)

This poem also hosted at my home poetry thread post #520 here http://www.rationalresponders.com/forum/31771?page=10

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13-12-2014, 02:14 PM
RE: Atheist Poetry
There once was a gal called witchy
Who'd find herself rather twitchy
When theists would roam...
Their fate they'd bemoan.
And their dribble only making her gritchy.

For this witch undecided remained
Awaiting evidence was her main game.
Theists plotted and planned
Their guns never manned
So she twirled bored fingers thru her mane.

Her big yawns & sighs could be heard
One after another Just a turd...
She waited and watched
Their stories all botched...
As they endlessly shared "the Word".

Over time nothing much changed.
The forum somewhat rearranged.
Friends she had sure
But none had a cure
So she remained rather deranged.

If you visit here & spy witch
Know shes no more than a subtle glitch
In the web of doers of good
Holding firm on all that they should...
No forum should you go switch.

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13-12-2014, 02:40 PM
RE: Atheist Poetry
Emily Dickinson was a bit of an agnostic at a time when such things, especially for a woman, was the stuff of witches. Had she lived today she would probably have been an atheist. She once said " The Supernatural is only the Natural disclosed."

Here's one of her poems.

Sweet Skepticism of the Heart



Sweet Skepticism of the Heart—
That knows—and does not know—
And tosses like a Fleet of Balm—
Affronted by the snow—
Invites and then retards the Truth
Lest Certainty be sere
Compared with the delicious throe
Of transport thrilled with Fear—

Shakespeare's Comedy of Errors.... on Donald J. Trump:

He is deformed, crooked, old, and sere,
Ill-fac’d, worse bodied, shapeless every where;
Vicious, ungentle, foolish, blunt, unkind,
Stigmatical in making, worse in mind.
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13-12-2014, 09:25 PM
RE: Atheist Poetry
This is an atheist poem about little Zeke, though he is not so little thanks to his physique.
Zeke is a teen and he is also a nigger.
Zeke can say nigger because he is black.
But if other races say it they are racist jack.

Zeke has dreams of living in Japan.
The land of his heroes ゴジラ and ウルトラマン。
He wants to stop thinking about japan
But america's bullshit gets him all mad.
He is tired of the shit from people like Ken Ham.
Who's stupidity shows this country is damned.
America is seen as really hating science.
As you can see from these test, for science america is just no the best.
Zeke must also add japan is much safer.
Japan's 0.3 beats America's 4.7.
Remember that number next time there is a robbery at 7-11.
Also keep in mind the lack of religious nuts, the ones here make Zeke go "What the fuck!?"

Lets also mention Zeke loves science.
If science was his woman he would give here the best climax.
He particularly loves zoology, more specifically animal genetics, evolution, behavior, and taxonomy.
He loves it so much, the slightest error makes him made.
He is looking at you FC, he is calling your name.
You saying morays are not eels drives him insane. The taxonomy of that is now out dated.
The taxonomy of that is 1,000 years old, morays are considered eels now don't you know?
I looked up its level and eel is an order.
On that morays belong to like he once told ya.
Sometimes he thinks you just like to fuck with his mind using this shitload of old lies.
Okay just fuck it onto the next place.
Video games seems to go at a good pace.

When it comes to games he likes TF2.
It is the best motherfucking shooter on PC.
It has funny ass characters
and a kick ass game play to boot.
TF2 is an amazing game
But Zeke likes Gears of War better anyway.
Gears of War is a sexy ass game
But don't look it up on rule 34 Zeke will say
As when he did he started crying that day.
Zeke just explained he doesn't roll that way
That penises are gross
And viginas are a okay.
Your probably wondering why he looked that up anyway?
Well Zeke wants Valera and Anya to fuck each okay.
Oh wait Zeke
you don't want me to say that you look that stuff up?
Well we can move onto the next subject if you want.

Capoeira and fitness
Something little Zeke loves.
Getting your self till you cry is apparently fun
And that leg workouts are number one.
Zeke practices capoeira at home
But still has no classes
This could be solved if he would just get off his ass.
He can do many kicks but not a hand stand
He likes capoeira more for the attacks than the dance.
He will however give it ago
Even if that means breaking a bone.

If you think Zeke no getting off his ass was bad
You should see how he treat its looks it's sad.
He once though he was ugly and it used to make him sad
Now thinks his face and smile makes every girl in between their pants glad.
He needs to stop smiling at himself in the mirror
I mean not missing the bus admiring your self is much better.
An irresponsible guy doesn't get a girl any wetter.

Now that I think about it this poem is messed up.
It is vulgar and full of gross things.
Who is going to want to read this poem?
This is not a poem dear sweet raptor jesus
It is a mess you would expect to be written by yeesus.
What is that Zeke
Just because the poem is about you it is better than the rest
But Zeke as I said this poem is a mess.
Isn't this poem about atheism and stuff?

I mean this poem was nothing but something off track
I can't believe you hired me to write this crap.
Wait what was that?
No I don't want to know what you would do to a girls clit!
I don't care about the money anymore
I am sick of this shit
I am done writing poems for you Zeke I quit

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17-12-2014, 01:58 PM
RE: Atheist Poetry
INRI, By Brian37 (AKA Brian James Rational Poet on FB and @Brianrrs37 on Twitter)



Introspection

Nowhere to be found

Rational thought

Is forbidden



In to do so

Negates the norm

Reason the victim

Inquisition



If to ban query

Never to question

Relegate oneself

In submission



In thus they claim

Never to falter

Rebel hero

In written word



In pior mytholgy

Never consider

Reject the truth

It is nothing new



It was Socrates

Not afraid

Reveled in challenge

In that of authority



In history proir

Not unique

Refused to submit

If those above him



If those above him

Never considered

Reason in question

In introspection



It's not a trope

New to Jesus

Rebels existed

In prior history.
(end)

Also posted at my home thread at Rational Responders post #521 hosted here http://www.rationalresponders.com/forum/...ent-414817

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01-02-2015, 08:55 AM
RE: Atheist Poetry
Hayhaoya Ishishdo, By Brian37 (AKA Brian James Rational Poet on FB and @Brianrrs37 on Twitter)

Kenji Kenji

What have they done

Kenji Kenji

They've taken your son


Mother Ishishido

Is everyone

Crying from

The rising sun


He carried no weapon

He will rise above

No matter how many

They needlessly murder


Kenji Kenji

No parent wants

To survive the death

Of their children


Ichiban

To the world you are

Kenji Kenji

The real hero


Kenji Kenji

Junko knows

The pain of the loss

Hahaoya Ishido

(end)


"Hahaoya" means "Mother". Ishido is Junko Ishido the mother of the murdered reporter Kenji Goto.

Also posted at my home thread listed in my signature post #553 hosted by Rational Responders.http://www.rationalresponders.com/forum/31771?page=11

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