Help required. Book review.

[Chas]

Is this going to happen?

[DLJ]

(19-11-2012 12:27 PM)Grassy Knoll Wrote:  DLJ, have you considered creating a private forum for easy discussion and collaboration about things? Ideas could be floated and sorted among a group instead of you or the author being bombarded with bunches of emails. Google groups or something like this might do http://www.createmybb.com/

Just from my first skimming I do have one suggestion on a better system for the web links being cited. First of all, a complex link doesn't work on printed paper. Second, it's bad flow. They don't look pleasing to the eye having to jump around them or read in between them. Third, unless you own a link yourself you have no way of controlling or changing a bad/dead link. How about making any links being referenced in the book simply collated onto a single webpage? A web based appendix. That way if a link needs to be updated or changed it can forever be a relevant reference.

I understand that this is still a work in progress so I apologize to the author if this is already on the to do list.

If I'm fitting myself into the list properly it looks like I'll be taking Chapters 20 through 23. How will you have me make my report?

Although I have no real idea what any of that means, it sounds like a good idea.

I am still waiting for the author to reply to me regarding my question about tone / intent.

I was just going to send my review back to the author. I guess you can do the same unless advised otherwise.

Cheers

[DLJ]

(19-11-2012 12:34 PM)Chas Wrote:  Is this going to happen?

I'll PM you the author's name so you can offer your services.

[Vosur]

(04-11-2012 09:22 AM)DLJ Wrote:  

(04-11-2012 09:16 AM)Chas Wrote:  It's in English, right?

Yes but it's mainly pictures cos it's a critique on recent trends in hard-core pornography.

(04-11-2012 09:23 AM)DLJ Wrote:  

(04-11-2012 09:17 AM)Bucky Ball Wrote:  What's the book about ?

Christianity.

[Mark Fulton]

Anyone interested in helping me edit my book, please go to http://www.ttaproject.createmybb3.com

Identify yourself there, and wait for me to "activate" you

There are already 9 people helping! Come on, I need your help!!

Thanks, Mark

[Question]

I'm not sure if I want to buy the book. :x Maybe if I see it at a thrift store.

[Mark Fulton]

(29-12-2012 10:52 PM)Red Tornado Wrote:  I'm not sure if I want to buy the book. :x Maybe if I see it at a thrift store.

Hey, I'm not trying to sell it here LOL

You can read it for free actually...just pretend you'll help me with a little editing.

[Question]

(29-12-2012 11:51 PM)Mark Fulton Wrote:  

(29-12-2012 10:52 PM)Red Tornado Wrote:  I'm not sure if I want to buy the book. :x Maybe if I see it at a thrift store.

Hey, I'm not trying to sell it here LOL

You can read it for free actually...just pretend you'll help me with a little editing.

Oh It's you? xDD I only read the OP, I thought it was for someone else.
Sure! I'll try. I can help with some grammar or suggestions to make it flow better.