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19-03-2013, 12:35 PM
RE: I'm drunk and can't think of a title.
(19-03-2013 10:03 AM)Peanut Wrote:  Misanthropik, perhaps you could envisage modifying the thread's title? I am confident people would be able to disregard any indifference if the first words they saw weren't, "I'm drunk and can't think of a title." One might be more focused on reading through with an open mind and absorb what was stated, rather than judging unsympathetically from the nascence of the story. That's just MY conviction...
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19-03-2013, 12:39 PM
RE: I'm drunk and can't think of a title.
I found the title intriguing.

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19-03-2013, 12:56 PM
RE: I'm drunk and can't think of a title.
I'm biased about the title "issue."

I will read everything Miso writes, no matter what the title or content Drinking Beverage

But I DO think that it sets an awkward tone before one can read the beautiful story and fully appreciate the words therein.
I can guess he will NOT change anything about it, knowing him as much as I do, but I thought I'd throw in my suggestion anyway.

I was also able to overlook his, at the time of posting, drunken state. I know it's not like him to ever do that and circumstances were different in the time of writing. I hope nobody ends up thinking he has some "problem." I don't see it. It was an isolated case and it's not his normal way of acting.

Again, amazing work on the story, Miso. It was awesome and I'm happy to have read it Thumbsup
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19-03-2013, 03:23 PM
RE: I'm drunk and can't think of a title.
(19-03-2013 12:56 PM)Peanut Wrote:  But I DO think that it sets an awkward tone before one can read the beautiful story and fully appreciate the words therein.
I sat there for a few minutes trying to come up with name. But...I was drunk. Couldn't think of a title. Undecided

(In light of audience feedback, however, I may take to calling it "Fuck yourself". Just because I'm "contumacious" that way) Big Grin

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19-03-2013, 03:27 PM
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"Fuck Yourself..." I don't know; I kinda like it. It has a certain flair Big Grin

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19-03-2013, 03:32 PM
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It definitely does. Plus it lets people know what they're in for! Smile

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19-03-2013, 03:36 PM
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*Fornicate Yourself

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19-03-2013, 03:44 PM
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"Go forth and fornicate with thy own self; for I am busy tending to my apathy."

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19-03-2013, 03:52 PM
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And now the story is complete... Bravo, Miso! I am so proud. I cannot WAIT to see the cover art.

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19-03-2013, 05:36 PM
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This is a rough cut I'm working on:
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