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28-08-2017, 03:10 PM
RE: My nascent chapter 1
(28-08-2017 02:50 PM)Clockwork Wrote:  All you do is tell us to visit your website. Why are you only here to advertise? Or will you just start yet another thread for your site?

I do not seek to earn money through advertising my personal website.

It's purely self-expression.

Got me?
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28-08-2017, 03:18 PM
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But you've started multiple threads just for your site. TTA isn't for you to advertise. Money or not. Or I don't think so.
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28-08-2017, 03:49 PM
RE: My nascent chapter 1
(28-08-2017 03:18 PM)Clockwork Wrote:  But you've started multiple threads just for your site. TTA isn't for you to advertise. Money or not. Or I don't think so.

What do you mean advertise?
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28-08-2017, 03:56 PM
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Since you're willfully misunderstanding, no reason to bother anymore.
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28-08-2017, 06:10 PM
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OK. Each to their own.

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28-08-2017, 07:00 PM
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(28-08-2017 02:50 PM)Clockwork Wrote:  All you do is tell us to visit your website. Why are you only here to advertise? Or will you just start yet another thread for your site?

Wayward marketing.

(28-08-2017 03:49 PM)Thinker Wrote:  
(28-08-2017 03:18 PM)Clockwork Wrote:  But you've started multiple threads just for your site. TTA isn't for you to advertise. Money or not. Or I don't think so.

What do you mean advertise?

This is why ya need uncle Banjo mate.

PM me all your banking details. I'll get it all set up for ya mate.

Trust me.

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28-08-2017, 07:16 PM
RE: My nascent chapter 1
(28-08-2017 06:10 PM)Thinker Wrote:  OK. Each to their own.

Exactly. And TTA is not "your own".

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29-08-2017, 03:51 AM
RE: My nascent chapter 1
(28-08-2017 03:49 PM)Thinker Wrote:  
(28-08-2017 03:18 PM)Clockwork Wrote:  But you've started multiple threads just for your site. TTA isn't for you to advertise. Money or not. Or I don't think so.

What do you mean advertise?

Quote:Advertise
verb
describe or draw attention to (a product, service, or event) in a public medium in order to promote sales or attendance.

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29-08-2017, 04:12 AM
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(28-08-2017 12:16 AM)Thinker Wrote:  I will take into account your constructive criticism.

I am very well aware that I am using multiple genres - sci fi and high fantasy, romance and action. However, did you read the chapter fully, which is 11 pages long which can be found via my website and its hyperlinked novels?

As for character names, most are my original ones. Actually, I'm being very radical and experimental so what I wrote may strike you as atypical, anachronistic and weird.

I will try to simplify language use but for all the characters and settings, I'm very clear what I want to convey - you just have to read through to the last page of the chapter.

There's no need to explain why you wrote what you wrote. The reader never cares. The reader only cares if the first few sentences are interesting. In your case, they're not. No one's gonna go on with a book they don't understand just to see if it all makes sense in the end.

I felt like I was reading automatically generated robotic speech. There was nothing even remotely human about it, nothing I could relate to; and I'm a fan of both fantasy and science fiction.

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29-08-2017, 06:30 AM (This post was last modified: 29-08-2017 06:34 AM by Thinker.)
RE: My nascent chapter 1
Thanks everyone.

All I can say is that I can't stand almost everyone's horrible, utterly disgusting comments!

I'm new here and all I get is such DISGUSTING, heartless responses.

I cannot help see if what you're saying is well intentioned, dry humour or what?

It isn't that alienating but it just feels weird that people can be so ignorant or I'm just personally very deeply shocked to realise that my writing is that mediocre to bad!

I've put all my efforts in and have perfected my writing to the point that it all falls apart, to my biggest dismay in a lifetime!

Do you not realise how UTTERLY SPEECHLESS I AM? Most of the responses strike me as APPALLINGLY RUDE!

I'm done here. I feel like no longer to connect with this forum of any sort - you've lost my respect, trust and confidence anyway. I didn't realise until this point that most atheists are just as rude, nasty and stupid as theists.

I better FUCK OUT!

I see a considerable immaturity and indecency here. PLEASE BE FRANK WITH ME - are you purposely antagonising towards me - are you ALL TRYING TO LET ME DOWN?

Well, I do no longer see you all as truly humans. True humans by my own definition do not act horribly like this. You unoriginal sheep and animals.
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