My short story im writing... Feedback.
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10-01-2013, 02:21 PM
RE: My short story im writing... Feedback.
(10-01-2013 01:42 PM)bemore Wrote:  
(10-01-2013 01:35 PM)DLJ Wrote:  Consider

Does he turn green when this happens?
He can if you want him to.

Without giving too much away these sections are just a quick build up/explanation of how John manages this "power" of his. Im nearly up to todays date and John will change the world.........

That's a relief.

I was worried it might be some cross between The Hulk and Carrie.

btw, have you read Nick Cave's And the Ass Saw the Angel?

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/And_the_Ass_Saw_the_Angel

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RE: My short story im writing... Feedback. - DLJ - 10-01-2013 02:21 PM
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