My short story im writing... Feedback.
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11-01-2013, 08:25 AM
RE: My short story im writing... Feedback.
(11-01-2013 08:16 AM)Svengali Wrote:  "Break it down" even more than you already did? I doubt that's possible.
Yes, break it down. Like explaining in your own words why you think it is shit.

If you just want someone to argue with and be nasty to I can do that, do it by PM though caus I dont need the attention.

For no matter how much I use these symbols, to describe symptoms of my existence.
You are your own emphasis.
So I say nothing.

-Bemore.
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RE: My short story im writing... Feedback. - bemore - 11-01-2013 08:25 AM
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