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16-08-2013, 03:41 PM
RE: Poets' Corner (Serious Poems)
(16-08-2013 03:40 PM)Ameron1963 Wrote:  It's Friday evening had I had a drink!

I drank one for my murdered brother. ("God forgive me!")

I had another for my dead father! ("God forgive me!")

Another for Mom! ("God forgive me!")

Had another for me! For poverty. For the lonely. For the lost, the ugly, the silly and the smart.

Then I just had another.

For the dark, deep well!

And my thirst fed me!

And found me!

In the dark!

In the deep!

In the well!

Well?
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16-08-2013, 03:44 PM
RE: Poets' Corner (Serious Poems)
(16-08-2013 03:41 PM)Ameron1963 Wrote:  
(16-08-2013 03:40 PM)Ameron1963 Wrote:  It's Friday evening and I had a drink!

I drank one for my murdered brother. ("God forgive me!")

I had another for my dead father! ("God forgive me!")

Another for Mom! ("God forgive me!")

Had another for me! For poverty. For the lonely. For the lost, the ugly, the silly and the smart.

Then I just had another.

For the dark, deep well!

And my thirst fed me!

And found me!

In the dark!

In the deep!

In the well!

Well?
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16-08-2013, 06:01 PM (This post was last modified: 16-08-2013 06:15 PM by GirlyMan.)
RE: Poets' Corner (Serious Poems)
(16-08-2013 03:40 PM)Ameron1963 Wrote:  It's Friday evening had I had a drink!

I drank one for my murdered brother. ("God forgive me!")

I had another for my dead father! ("God forgive me!")

Another for Mom! ("God forgive me!")

Had another for me! For poverty. For the lonely. For the lost, the ugly, the silly and the smart.

Then I just had another.

For the dark, deep well!

And my thirst fed me!

And found me!

In the dark!

In the deep!

In the well!

Well?

Well indeed? Like 3x well indeed? Thumbsup

As it was in the beginning is now and ever shall be, world without end. Amen.
And I will show you something different from either
Your shadow at morning striding behind you
Or your shadow at evening rising to meet you;
I will show you fear in a handful of dust.
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16-08-2013, 06:25 PM
RE: Poets' Corner (Serious Poems)
(16-08-2013 06:01 PM)GirlyMan Wrote:  
(16-08-2013 03:40 PM)Ameron1963 Wrote:  It's Friday evening had I had a drink!

I drank one for my murdered brother. ("God forgive me!")

I had another for my dead father! ("God forgive me!")

Another for Mom! ("God forgive me!")

Had another for me! For poverty. For the lonely. For the lost, the ugly, the silly and the smart.

Then I just had another.

For the dark, deep well!

And my thirst fed me!

And found me!

In the dark!

In the deep!

In the well!

Well?

Well indeed? Like 3x well indeed? Thumbsup

I liked the third one.

The other two? Meh!
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17-08-2013, 12:14 PM
RE: Poets' Corner (Serious Poems)
(16-08-2013 06:25 PM)DLJ Wrote:  
(16-08-2013 06:01 PM)GirlyMan Wrote:  Well indeed? Like 3x well indeed? Thumbsup

I liked the third one.

The other two? Meh!
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Um.... It's possible I shouldn't have had that last drink! But, think about it! Three times sure gets the drinking part across! Either I screwed up the post, or I'm a fucking genius!

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17-08-2013, 12:35 PM
RE: Poets' Corner (Serious Poems)
(17-08-2013 12:14 PM)Ameron1963 Wrote:  
(16-08-2013 06:25 PM)DLJ Wrote:  I liked the third one.

The other two? Meh!
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Um.... It's possible I shouldn't have had that last drink! But, think about it! Three times sure gets the drinking part across! Either I screwed up the post, or I'm a fucking genius!

Well?

The latter. Hence the 'like' for the last poem.

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17-08-2013, 02:06 PM
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There was a broken corner in my tiny room. I found it and I crawled into it. Into the depth of the universe. And I slept with the peace of the universe. And my dream created a bridge. I floated to see it revealed beneath my swollen feet. I saw it float below my frozen feet. I wanted to touch the bridge, to see where it would lead! It could have lead anywhere! It might have had me stride to the back of all creation and answered all my lovely, poignant, beautiful questions! It could have marked me as a worthy soul! But I couldn't reach it, caress it have it envelope me. But I have my broken corner. Where I hide. In my tiny room.
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17-08-2013, 03:33 PM
RE: Poets' Corner (Serious Poems)
(17-08-2013 12:14 PM)Ameron1963 Wrote:  
(16-08-2013 06:25 PM)DLJ Wrote:  I liked the third one.

The other two? Meh!
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Um.... It's possible I shouldn't have had that last drink!

Bah, it's brilliant! It shall henceforth be known as the AmIOne Triple Post for Emphasis literary technique. Big Grin

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Your shadow at morning striding behind you
Or your shadow at evening rising to meet you;
I will show you fear in a handful of dust.
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17-08-2013, 03:44 PM
RE: Poets' Corner (Serious Poems)
(17-08-2013 02:06 PM)Ameron1963 Wrote:  There was a broken corner in my tiny room. I found it and I crawled into it. Into the depth of the universe. And I slept with the peace of the universe. And my dream created a bridge. I floated to see it revealed beneath my swollen feet. I saw it float below my frozen feet. I wanted to touch the bridge, to see where it would lead! It could have lead anywhere! It might have had me stride to the back of all creation and answered all my lovely, poignant, beautiful questions! It could have marked me as a worthy soul! But I couldn't reach it, caress it have it envelope me. But I have my broken corner. Where I hide. In my tiny room.

Just ... fucking ... brilliant ... Bravo! [Image: bravo-7466.gif]

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And I will show you something different from either
Your shadow at morning striding behind you
Or your shadow at evening rising to meet you;
I will show you fear in a handful of dust.
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18-08-2013, 05:34 PM
RE: Poets' Corner (Serious Poems)
(17-08-2013 03:33 PM)GirlyMan Wrote:  
(17-08-2013 12:14 PM)Ameron1963 Wrote:  Um.... It's possible I shouldn't have had that last drink!

Bah, it's brilliant! It shall henceforth be known as the AmIOne Triple Post for Emphasis literary technique. Big Grin

Lol! Dude!
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